Closure, the Rewrite
![]() Anyone remember Closure? It was my serialized scifi-noir I ran from March of last year through September of last year, and its second-to-last installment marked the end of book one. At its peak it had a decent following, and episodes had as many as thirty or so comments (form probably only six or seven people, but still). I’ve been meaning to get back to it all this time, and… well…. I’m rewriting book one in order to correct some continuity issues as well as improving the pacing and reducing the exposition. The episodes will be posted one a week this time, ensuring that I’ll easily keep up with the volume (I burned myself out running two a week last year) and, as a matter of fact, I’ve returned to working on book two, which should comprise the surprising completion of the story. You might think you knew where it was going, but I doubt you were correct. Here’s the deal, though: as part of an experiment to spread my seed in other wombs I’m posting the episodes at a place you might now know about, The Observationist. I’m not sure how good a fit my material will be over there, but it will at the very least expose it to a few new people. I’ll cross-post a couple days after the episodes show up at The Observationist, for those who feel more comfortable in my big, strong, safe arms. If you’ve already read all the original episodes, there will be only a few changes and you might not even notice them if you weren’t paying really close attention the first time around. You’re welcome to comment if you like, or to pass on the whole mess (if you feel betrayed by my one-year-plus hiatus). Tomorrow is my office Christmas Party, during which I will do my best to get banned from the go-cart track. |





I’m there with bells on! Well, it tis the season for bells after all.
Hope you’re doing well SafeT.
Joe-Im looking fwd to being introduced to this serial. the link to leave a URL is errored out as well.
btw, how was the go-cart xmas party?
Hey SafeT
Been a while but I’m back.
Surgery was all good, back home with some extra bandages and a million staples.
Sorry to hear about your little traffic indiscretion, glad to hear you’re ok though.
Anyway, bee seeing ya round.
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